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sparkism ([personal profile] sparkism) wrote2007-01-07 12:31 pm

[Kingdom Hearts] Dying [1/7]

(1/7)
Title: Dying
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: The closest to sex I will ever get. xDD Using your imagination is good for you.
Disclaimer: Kingdom Hearts is, most obviously, owned by big name companies and not by a girl sitting at a laptop on her bedroom floor.
Summary: In which Xemnas brings up a morbid topic at a rather inappropriate time.
A/N: I AM NOT A LAZY PERSON. T-T Okay, so maybe I am. Fragments are poetic!
Bah. It’ll be better next time, I promise. I blame the ficlet prompts.



“Do Nobodies die? Do they waste away, heartless and empty?”

A moan. Kisses press against soft flesh.

“Or are they to live forever, looking for a way out?”

The whisper of sheets. Hands roaming.

“Can’t you shut up about that for more than five minutes, Xemnas?”

A chuckle. Bedsprings groan.

“So sorry, Saïx. I can’t help myself.”

Hands run through long hair. Another moan.

“And I can’t help myself with this. So just—”

Lips captured. Hands clench.

“Shut up, shut up, I know.”

Fabric rustles. Jackets are shed.

“...Do Nobodies die?”

A pause. Breath heavy.

“See, now you are bringing it up.”

Trailing fingers. A growl.

“Xemnas...”

Laughter. More kisses on flushed skin.

“Forget I ever brought it up.”

A loud sigh. All is put aside until later.



Previous Drabbles
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[1/2] [1/6]
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[identity profile] silvestris.livejournal.com 2007-01-07 07:38 pm (UTC)(link)
... XDXDXD 10 points for this one. The interaction was so wonderfully spot-on, I really like how you wrote these two! Very at ease, yet with the necessary tension - and still so funny. I laughed out loud. XD
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)

[personal profile] admiral 2007-01-07 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ Xemnas and Saix make me happy. xD I should write more with them.
BUT NOT UNTIL I FINISH THE REST OF THE STUFF I NEED TO FINISH, RAWR.

So happy you enjoyed it! ^-^ *glomps*

[identity profile] sylc.livejournal.com 2007-01-08 03:09 am (UTC)(link)
*chuckles* I see a need for Saïx to venture into the realm of kinky sex and mouth gags. (^__^)

Less is often more in sex scenes. Forcing the reader to use their imagination by writing less and just using key guiding words in the characters' actions is a good tactic in getting the reader relaxed and more intimate with the fic. I think the fic works very well as a result. Well done.
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)

[personal profile] admiral 2007-01-08 03:29 am (UTC)(link)
*chuckles* I see a need for Saïx to venture into the realm of kinky sex and mouth gags. (^__^)

xDDD *glomps*

Aw, thank you. ^-^ You always know the perfect things to say to make me happy, you know? Heeheh. ♥

[identity profile] kaiamara.livejournal.com 2007-01-08 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
XD SCORE!

Nicely done again.
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)

[personal profile] admiral 2007-01-08 07:55 pm (UTC)(link)
♥ Thankies! ♥

[identity profile] flagellantket.livejournal.com 2007-01-10 09:07 pm (UTC)(link)
Woo. Xenmas/Saix is one of my favorite pairings! Very well-done, and still very sexy.
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)

[personal profile] admiral 2007-01-11 03:33 am (UTC)(link)
*waves 1/7 flag* Xemnas/Saix for the win!
Heehee. ♥

[identity profile] myobu-ontherun.livejournal.com 2007-04-22 09:30 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah, using imagination is SOO good for me. *swipes away the drool*

Damn, now you made me want to write something in fragments, too. ._.
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)

[personal profile] admiral 2007-04-22 08:07 pm (UTC)(link)
♥♥xDD

Do it, do it!