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So sorry for the belated update - I've had more to do these last couple of days than I expected. Just today I have homework in EVERY subject minus anthropology, not to mention an orchestra concert I have to be at by six. And to top it all off, my brother never gave me back the house key, so I was locked out of the house for half an hour when I got home. Ugh.


(12/11)
Title: Dark
Rating: PG
Warnings: Language and occasional...suggestiveness? Yes.
Disclaimer: Kingdom Hearts is, most obviously, owned by big name companies and not by a girl sitting at a laptop on her bedroom floor.
Summary: In which Marluxia and Larxene find themselves in a compromising position. Or two.
A/N: Oh, math class. You inspire me to do stupid things with fairly interesting prompts. xD
Felt like effing up some dialogue today. Brain’s still not functioning properly.



In unknown circumstances, it is best not to be left standing in the dark.
Figuratively and literally.

“Where the fuck are we now?”

“In a small, cramped space?”

“Well thank you Larxene, I didn’t notice. How silly of me.”

“There’s no need to get snippy, I was only answering your question. Oh....”

“Yes, Larxene?”

“Would you be mad if I told you I think we’re in a giant whale?”

“We’re in a whale?”

“It would appear so. Or, not appear, as I can barely see my own hands in front of me. What’s this?”

“That would be my hip, Larxene.”

“Ah. Right then.”

“Look, if you’d just stop moving—”

“Where in the whale do you think we are?”

“What?”

“I was wondering where in the whale we were. How come you only have superb hearing when you want to, Marluxia?”

“I would rather not like to know, personally. And I don’t know what you’re talking about. Now if you just moved to the left — your other left — Larxene!”

“Yes?”

“Do you know where your hands are at the moment?”

“They’re right....there.”

“Exactly.”

“It’s only, I’m not sure where else to put them....”

“Just work on getting us out of here, all right? Bloody whale.... Xemnas is definitely going to be hearing some complaints about this mission, that’s for sure.”

“What, you don’t like working with me?”

“It’s nothing personal of course, Larxene. I just, you know, like people to respect my personal space.”

“You have no concept of personal space....”

“What was that? I didn’t hear you.”

“I’m working on getting out of this damn tiny space, Marluxia!”

“Good to hear it.”



Previous Drabbles
[12/1] [12/5] [12/9]
[12/2] [12/6] [12/10]
[12/3] [12/7]
[12/4] [12/8]

Date: 2006-12-13 07:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] silvestris.livejournal.com
Gods, I laughed so hard at this. To keep the entire thing in dialogue made it even better. I know I use the word 'brilliance' a lot about your ficlets, and quite often along with words like 'sheer' or 'pure', but things like this leave any other choice of words lacking.

One of my favorites, so far! Sheer brilliance.
Oh, wait, I said it again, didnt I? ^_^;

Date: 2006-12-13 08:37 pm (UTC)
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)
From: [personal profile] admiral
♥ ♥ Glad you liked it! ^-^

Aha, that's okay. I use the word brilliant all the time. It's a spiffy word. And it's better than using "awesome" or whatever all the time.
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Date: 2006-12-13 08:44 pm (UTC)
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)
From: [personal profile] admiral
xD
Ha. Does Monstro even like, have to do anything like that? I mean, in the game it's a large, flying, space whale.
:roffle:
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Date: 2006-12-18 08:01 pm (UTC)
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Default)
From: [personal profile] admiral
....You have a point.
xD

Date: 2007-01-18 01:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] masakomoonshade.livejournal.com
Luverly. Absolutely luverly. I especially love the ambience that you have with just the dialog.

Date: 2007-01-18 02:50 am (UTC)
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)
From: [personal profile] admiral
^-^ Heehee. Thank you!

Date: 2007-03-13 07:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lorei.livejournal.com
...I love that it's dialoge. Because of course it is, they're in the dark so there's nothing to describe!

And Larxene/Marluxia makes me tres happy~

Date: 2007-03-13 07:58 pm (UTC)
admiral: gwendolyn → odin sphere (Perky)
From: [personal profile] admiral
Heehee. ♥

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